Gr8 poem, I really liked it, Keep it up.. !

i c the hidden message 2...great job i loved it keep up the good --if u want u can check out my poems--esp the one called A love I have Never Once Met..thanks a bunch
x0x--Jenna

Very very nice! Yes, I see the message too :o)

You picked a very good opening line... it seems so lonely all by it self... sitting there missing her...

Great work!