Comments : Taking his life

  • 19 years ago

    by Stacie

    <pours water on you, your write sad poems and it makse me feel sad because you write poems about death and depression and if anything ever did happen to you then I would go insane. Because I love you because you are 1 of my best friends and I have few best friends. This poem was really good and sad.
    loads of love
    @---->----------

  • 19 years ago

    by Paige

    That was really gorgeous 10/10 :D
    I think evry1 in sum way could relate 2 it :)
    Take care
    :) Paige (:

  • 19 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    awesome poem! i love how it tells a story, and the ending is REALLY good, 5/5 definitely, great work!

  • 19 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Just utterly great. wow, thats all i gotta say. Check out some of my poems when u get the chance.

  • 18 years ago

    by Neha

    wow...great poem!!....5/5.....ur an awesome writer....so keep writing!