Hey, this is a really good poem. Thanks for the comment. I will be posting more of my work this weekend. Hope you come back and visit. This poem kinda relates to me except the day I wrote the poem about him I showed him. Well I should be heading out. Take Care. ~Sunshine~

beautiful...beauitful...
-Mortalidaga

i luv it i gave it a 5/5 another poem by sum1 who writes about every day ovvurences its possible to fall in luv with sum1 u never met same with my and my boyfriend! reald my poem "online" and rate and comment please it relates to this one in a way and alot of other ones keep writing girl u doin gr8!

Nice poem I like it alot! 5/5 ! you should come comment on one of mine i worked hand on them too:)
bye xoxo

It,s a beautiful poem with lots of inner feeling added to it...
I know this feeling... It happened to me aswell.. and will never be able to forget him
5/5,, Great work of the heart!!