Sorry for the repeated submissions. IT was a mistake. I will surely delete it off, when Janis gives the right to delete poems again.

well ive never read sonnets before, so im not one to judge, but i did think it was really good. i loved it! very good detail, some of the words that had to ryhme kinda confused me, but not to the point where i didnt understand what was being said. again great job!

Wowww....dats cool!....da sonne tsequence,,,,,,,,

wow! that looks so hard! uve written it really well and nice theme also.....where do u get all these formats from???

Wow! I was wondering what you were working on that was keeping you from posting! This First part was awesome! I am anxious to get to the next set!

Great poem(s)...I think sonnets are supposed to have exactly 10 syllables, am I wrong? Regardless it was awesome...I also wrote a sonnet...it's called "starting up again"....mine also took me forever to complete

Danielle, Not all sonnets have to have 10 syllables. But some do. Some require alternative stressed and unstressed syllables too. I picked the easy ones. Which only concentrates on rhymes! lol!
I read yours. It's an awesome poem.

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Thanks every body for commenting and encouraging. BEcause of you all i was inspired to write the next part. I Hope to post it soon.
Love, Trincy.
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Trincy this is simply amazing..I am always inspired with your work and also how you manage to write in different forms...breathtaking, can't wait to read the next part!!!! Michelle :)