I can say this is the best poem I have read!
Its not a poem saying "oh im depressed" But has so much tought put into it! well done. you managed to make the flow great, use excellent words and put it all together so well.
I really enjoyed it! most interresting poem ive read!
I really enjoyed the poem and sensed a definite flow and rhythm which is always a good thing. Thanks for the comment and congratulations on your publication. It is one of my many dreams to publish a book so I was hoping to get some advice and maybe you could read some more of my work and judge whether or not it's to a publishing standard. I would greatly appreciate it if you do get the time. Finally I have to say brilliant poem 5/5 =)
14 years ago
by Arsalan D
Amazingly written, There is no power like the power of imagination, it's the building block of creativity. Thank you and keep writing.
Wow! that was cool some very strong ideas portraied in a fantastic poem. I was a bit concerned when I saw the layout but as I was reading i found it to be interesting and a positive influence on the verse. Great work!!
All i can say si "WOW!!!" great job. so much thought in one poem. i loved the choice of words! it was great! i wish i could come to conclusions like that. i totally agree with everything u put into this poem!!
This my friend is definately as poetic as it gets, the flow of the words was amazing and many lines had 2-3 rhymes in each. The truth is we can never really know for sure what the truth of the world really is, all we can do is live life to the fullest and live it for ourselves not for god. Excellent job with this poem 5/5 nothing less is deserved GG23