Comments : Imagination

  • 15 years ago

    by It Itty

    Wow--that is incredible. I have an athiest friend that I've been witnessing to for a while. This really puts into perspective for me, what he must think and believe. Wonderful job!

  • 14 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    I can say this is the best poem I have read!
    Its not a poem saying "oh im depressed" But has so much tought put into it! well done. you managed to make the flow great, use excellent words and put it all together so well.

    Greta work!

    I really enjoyed it! most interresting poem ive read!

  • 14 years ago

    by TragicRomance

    That was AWSOME! You are GREAT! KEEP IT UP!

  • 14 years ago

    by Renee

    As I've said before, I'm not one for religion. But you've definitley made it something worth reading. I love your perspective, even if it doesn't comply with my own. Great job

    Take Care,
    Renee

  • 14 years ago

    by Andrea

    Your an amazing writer. every word goes perfectly with the rhyme. its so nice to just read a poem that has a good steady flow. awesome!

  • 14 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Awww..that was beautiful.
    I loved how you decribed the universe, and eternity.
    Very special.

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 13 years ago

    by Amanda

    This is one of your best poems! I like them all but this one has something else to it. It is so beautifully written with deep thoughts. Keep it up!

  • 13 years ago

    by Dean Russell-Rands

    I really enjoyed the poem and sensed a definite flow and rhythm which is always a good thing. Thanks for the comment and congratulations on your publication. It is one of my many dreams to publish a book so I was hoping to get some advice and maybe you could read some more of my work and judge whether or not it's to a publishing standard. I would greatly appreciate it if you do get the time. Finally I have to say brilliant poem 5/5 =)

  • 13 years ago

    by Arsalan D

    Amazingly written, There is no power like the power of imagination, it's the building block of creativity. Thank you and keep writing.

  • 13 years ago

    by aaron 1 remo

    Wow! that was cool some very strong ideas portraied in a fantastic poem. I was a bit concerned when I saw the layout but as I was reading i found it to be interesting and a positive influence on the verse. Great work!!
    Aaron (remo)

  • 13 years ago

    by Natalie

    A really great poem. It really went into depth and makes the reader think. The flow and rhyming were both great. It was a beautiful piece overall. I liked it alot! Keep it up! 5/5

    `Taleee.

  • 13 years ago

    by A Christoffer

    All i can say si "WOW!!!" great job. so much thought in one poem. i loved the choice of words! it was great! i wish i could come to conclusions like that. i totally agree with everything u put into this poem!!

  • 13 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    Wow this one was a definate favorite by far. I loved the question that you were asking and the flow was so not forced! It all went together so very well it was perfect.........

    -AnnMarie

  • 13 years ago

    by Deana

    A wonderful poem ,I agree by the way I think creation is the only logical conclusion, you bring that out very well.
    thank you for reading mine and your comment.

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I liked this, it's my favourite so far.

  • 12 years ago

    by Poetically Speaking

    It's been a road for me to find my faith, and I do agree with a lot of you say here. I hope there is a God. Awesome poem man.

  • 12 years ago

    by Mousie

    Another great poem... you're a great writer. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This my friend is definately as poetic as it gets, the flow of the words was amazing and many lines had 2-3 rhymes in each. The truth is we can never really know for sure what the truth of the world really is, all we can do is live life to the fullest and live it for ourselves not for god. Excellent job with this poem 5/5 nothing less is deserved GG23

  • 12 years ago

    by Mel

    Kinda reminded me of a rap.
    also kinda reminded me of a poem that i would study and like...pick apart line by line at school. which basically means its good lol.
    good job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Gerard Kurt

    I too don't believe the universe happened by chance because even this comment came from someone, right?
    Well done...