excellent poem, i love the idea o the mirror, well done!

you did an absolutly great job! you are a wonderful writter!

It was a good, though sad, poem (duh it's in the sad section). I have no idea what "kohled" means though. Is it a real word? I couldn't find it in the dictionary, but maybe it is either a technical word (like a medical one) or it is a colloquial expression. Could you explain that sometime?

i like it thought it was very well written.

good poem, very mysterious, very visual, very good

This was an awesome poem. I loved it. Kudos