Wow this is a really good poem! i love the way it flows.

nice poem girl...keep it up!!

whoa! This is my new best poem.
Very very ingenious.
Different from what I see here.
Good job.

I really loved this poem. I though the wording of it was perfect. Can't wait to read more.

I was not sure what word I wanted touse for this... so I peeked at the comments and I'm gonna steal Meena's word.... this was very rejuvenating!!

I loved the flow of it..andhow it went from hopeless to hopeful....

very well done!

that is so beautiful..fantastic work..dont stop writing :)
-Mortalidaga

that is so beautiful..fantastic work..dont stop writing :)
-Mortalidaga

like the way u present this poem . u are a very good writter , it a poetic journey . and it gives me as a reader a very uplifting feeling .

Very uplifting poem! I gave it another 5!