Comments : The People of the Grave

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacki

    The whispers are growing louder,
    The excitement is at a peak;
    There is a truth out there,
    And the Wind begins to speak.

    ...but he is still alive!

    OH I just loved this one. I wish more people would read it. I like the flow to it, i love those lines above. I had amazing visuals expecially about his mother screaming like a banshee. That was great! I thought you did a great job writing this, is there going to be a sequel does he come back from the UNREST place? That would be neet to like 100 years down the road etc....I don't kow i'm just rambling lol, Great Poem.