Speechless!

I have nothing more to say besides that it was absolutly great!

Thats awesome! Its totally insane but I love it! hehe Keep writing, thats amazing

Damn kool...Thats all i can say...u write too well...just keep it up and keet writing...excellent!....

this is the best poem i've read on here. This is my sort of stuff, as you can tell from my writing. But yours is amazing!! This poem is going to get a 5, and should not get anything less. Keep writing this was excellent!!!!

thats an awesome piece of work....damn it makes me feel so insignificant

please keep it up i love reading your work, awesome poem!!!!!!

That was unlike anything I've ever written. Beautifully done.

hey very nice poem!!!! its more of a short story though. but i like it!!!! you really can painta picture in my mind and can create very good illusions!!!!

what a really good poem!...you really painted some nice visuals, you really are a talented writer, now i can't wait to start reading some more :)

Very good Julie....I have never read anything like this before......Great job!