Very original! i really liked it! nothing like i've read before!

I enjoyed reading this poem. Its unlike other poems on here that i have read. You work out side the normal "box" I like that alot. Keep writing your amazing.

I certainly agree wiv some gurl...this poem was lovely!...keep it up!

Hayyyy....kohl is a black substance that u put in ur eyes to ake em luk dark...

n ya....sable means...pitch dark!

yeh i am Lucifer, good job.

great poem, it was so excellent! -xx-

Nice work and an excellent poetic interpretatation of a classic theme.

Heh, well you certainly hae enough praise so i'll provide the criticism. Everything flows and rhmes great except near the end becase 'end' and 'and' doesn't ryhme very much. and... well that's about it.
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Aken Sol

Very cool write:) dream-like

That was awesome. Very well written.

Very nice poetic retelling of Orpheus... always a wonderful tragedy. With the possible exception of the last stanza, you wove your tone excellently throughout.

You know how much i love this myth and you told it so beautifully well done