Sounds like great lyrics to a song. You should try it.

Very smooth poem. Good flow. I haven't tried this sonnet. MAy be i should :) try it soon! Great poem.

I love this poem because of the ryhme scheme I write alot and have noticed that I've stuck by one ryhme scheme for a while and it's really nice to see soemthing different and I can totally relate to this poem. Keep up the good work

I really loved this piece. The words flowed naturally and your choice of words really made the poem come to life!! Well done from a very talented poet!!