Hayyyyyyy...Im the first one to read this:D.....its really cool...keep it up!

very sad..and very nice...i felt like i was watching a movie when i read the entire thing together..... :-)

To "Done with this stupid site"

Oh.. i typed a long reply.. But it disappeared. I have no more patience to type the whole thing again. I will type as much as I can once more.

Thanks for pointing out the spelling mistake. I appreciate your sincere criticism. You gave me a lot valuable information. I am sure this will be helpful to many.

Yes you were right about some things...but wrong about some other things.

There are not only two types of sonnet. But there are a lot more. I can give you the web links to some of them. Of course, the English and the Italian are the two major ones. I have tried writing an Italian sonnet. But i realize i haven't followed some of the rules. Once i get the chance i will edit it.

You said much about Shakespearian Sonnets. They are a lot difficult and so i didn't try it yet. The other sonnets which i have tried have much much lesser rules. You should have checked it before blaming me. I have provided the names of each sonnet I have tried.. You had the opportunity to make a search of it before blaming. But Mr. Perfect jumped into conclusions.

Here are some web links… IF you want to further investigate, try these web links
http://www.geocities.com/Bikies_poetry/sonnet1.html
http://www.geocities.com/Bikies_poetry/sonnet2.html

You will find many of the sonnets, which I have tried in these sites.

I know you will never be satisfied. If you still find mistakes.. you can point it out. I do appreciate it. I am not here to listen only sweet words. So you are welcome.
Good day to you SIR!

omg DONE WITH THIS STUPID SITE, get over it, it was a fantastic poem and thats all that matters, if poems are perfect, then thyre not real and from the heart.

wd and keep writing :) xoxox

OHHHhhh, Trincy, that was sooo sad!

and very beautifully written!

Trincy again that was amazing work...I am truly impressed...and from the dads point of view was just inspired. So..SOOOO Sad, as previously stated..can't wait to see your next poem..take care, Michelle :)