WOW....beautifully written!! I didn't expect the ending! Very nice!! Although it was terribly sad I think it was the best I have read in a while!! Excellent write!! 5/5 :) TAKE CARE!!

A very good poem with an excellent ending. My favorite part 5/5!

awwww thats such a great poem!!! realy sweet and sad! keep up the good work! :)

*~peace and love~*

*dies*..that was so amazing..defanetely a tear jerker..*wipes eye* keep it up 5/5

Hey, thanks for the comments on my poems. I really like this one, I like the aspect of how you wrote it like you were the mother in the grave, nice.