This is a true poem, it happend when I was in the 1st or 2nd grade

this poem is very good and very sad.. im sorry that its a true story but im glad that nothing happend.. keep up the good work cause this was amazing. I gave u a 5

As much as i cannot stand police and the way they abuse their authority (not all, im not generalising just judging from personal exp) BUT this poem opened my eyes a lil - im glad they were there for you and your brother and i hope you never have to go thru that again!

Oh i almost forgot well done on a great poem - keep writing :o)

Wow thats awful, i'm sorry you still have a memory of it... it's awful well your childhood memories still haunt you... awsome poem keep it up..
Sarah