WOW I love this poem it truly is awesome, I can kind of relate to it, keep up the great work and never stop writing cause you have a real talent!

A very unique poem. Again, it was very sad, but an alright poem. It didn't seem to have much flow, but other than that...it was great. Just keep writing.

wow that was great i can relate to that!!

Excellent writing. fantastic. i love it.