This poem is so good, just like the other poems you write for this situation. I love them so much, it makes me feel like I know you because I've felt the same way. I'm adding you to my favorites [-:

this is a brilliant poem. i love the lines

And as her hand slipped from mine
A part of me died right there
I opened my mouth to call her name
But nothing came out except air.

its really deep, and so touching. i absolutely love it. xmollyxx