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While love is a harsh game,
Those at peace prevail,
Where scratches and bruises can maim,
True love lets us sail.

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WAT CAN I SAY......MY FAVORITE BY U SO FAR

very good! it has great rythem, i like the choice of words. And it has a great message! very well done!

Wow, this one is even better than the other one I read. You've got alot of talent, keep writing and I hope to see some more by you in the near future.

--Bryce~