Comments : Sail Away

  • 19 years ago

    by TAinted vįŕťues

    "

    While love is a harsh game,
    Those at peace prevail,
    Where scratches and bruises can maim,
    True love lets us sail.

    "

    WAT CAN I SAY......MY FAVORITE BY U SO FAR

  • 19 years ago

    by Katie Silva

    very good! it has great rythem, i like the choice of words. And it has a great message! very well done!

  • 19 years ago

    by Bryce Ellner

    Wow, this one is even better than the other one I read. You've got alot of talent, keep writing and I hope to see some more by you in the near future.

    --Bryce~