OMG! That was so touching. I almost cried. lol Tyler, the gurl that end up with u is gona be so lucky! ur an amazing guy.

That was breathtaking! I am in awe!! Very beautifully written!!!!!!

thank u for the comments :) means alot

Wow! That was so heart-rending and beautiful!

Wonderful...so wonderful!! I loved that poem so much....I had tears in my eyes! You are such a wonderful poet...I love all your stuff!!!! Beautiful poem!
Amy

dat was hot....

That was an AMAZING poem you wrote there....it so sweet....thank u for sharing this with us and keep it up..
*Sw33ti3*

Wow that was extremely touching. I really enjoyed it. I'd do the same thing for a girl I cared about as well.

Thank u for all the comments :)... this site has been screwing up for me way to much so im rarely on cuz i keep getting "This website is currently Unavaliable!" yea its weird...

But ima try to submit more

awesome poem!!!! take care of yaself!!! keep writing gave it 5
luv jessycar

This is a VERY well written poem...It is the best one ever...I didnt think a poem could ever make me cry but this one did...It was sad...I loved it...Keep up the awesome wrote cuz you are truely one good writer...Chow for now...Jennie

omg..thats so sweet...thats an amazing poem..<33 fantastic work ^_^ <33
-Mortalidaga

This poem is so good. You're such a talented writer and so sweet. I gave it a 5 anyway.

OMG...WOW that was a REALLY great poem i dont know alot of guys that can write that good.. It was sad but at the same time VERY sweet! I give this a BIG 5...keep of the great work!

that was a true hearted poem and i give thumbs up on it just becuase it was really good but the topic was even amazing.. end her cries is the best because no man should hit a gurl~ we aren't that strong.. we can't get that mad and make marks too... so good for u that u created a great poem it was amazing
Lys

hey gr8 poem . keep it up .. check out mine soemtime too

Damn. Now that is what you call a great poem. That in one of the best that I have looked at on this site. You got some skills. Keep it up.

OMG! That was such a well written and beautiful poem every part of it i enjoyed...the storyline, the descriptive words and flow you have used! Great job keep it up and if you have a moment check out some of my work

Hey Sorry everyone im at my friends now... So i can get on... I will try and check ur poems out if i can ever figure out whats wrong with this site on my comp... Any suggestions or if u wanna talk u can message me on
Msn - no1whomatters@hotmail.com
Or Yahoo - Last_breath_1

Holy cow......this poem is so amazing, I don't even knwo where to start. Awesome job is all i can say, and that doesn't even begin to cover the effect this poem had on me, and im sure everyone else who reads it. ~dandy~