awe :( i knwo what it feels like to lose a friend and someoen u love to death at the same time...

This poem really captured those emotions and flaunted them... anyone who has been throught the same thing can relate.... and anyone who hasn't should feel ur pain while they read this...

U have such a way with words... never quit.... i know i did for a while but i am writting again :)

Dainelle im sorry bout ur bf..he really doesnt know what hes missing. ur an amazing person. but wow i loved this poem. so much emotion. great work!
p.s hope everything works out for u

I can totally relate. The title of the poem is what really caught my attention, for trust is such a strong word, and often said when not meant. I'm really sorry for what you're going through ... break-ups are bad! You're writing is still so good!

I luv this poem!! <33 Great job! Keep writing :)