Comments : Secret love... Secret lie...

  • 19 years ago

    by Allen

    I don't like sad poems... but Im just not the happiest self right now, feelings has to come out....

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    omg..allen..thats so beautifully written! you have such talent..i must read more of your work! dont stop writing :) take care <333
    -Mortalidaga

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    I really liked this poem! It conveyed how I feel most of the time! Very touching....

  • 19 years ago

    by juss an allycat

    aww that made me think about a guy that likes me and how he must feel. a bit of a wake-up call uno wat i mean? it was really sad but had this beat to it that made it awesome 2 read.

    xxoo,
    alysse

  • 19 years ago

    by Princess Duckie

    Love the sad stuff... keep it up :-(

  • 19 years ago

    by Bryce Ellner

    Hey I like the flow of that, very nice.

    --Bryce~

  • 19 years ago

    by beaver

    I loved this. Well done!

  • Very well written. Hmm but sad poem. Sad times are the best to pen down our emotions. But you look cute when you smile!!! (He heee... i just guessed that! I haven't seen you yet!!!)

  • 19 years ago

    by *Elizabeth*

    WOW..I LOVED this poem!! great job!

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Val

    Hey I love this poem!! I think it's on my website too!! Well keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by martina foust

    very deep poem... i know how you feel i look forward to hearing more

  • 19 years ago

    by Edina

    wow! thats a wonderful poem.. u chose just the right word to show how many people can relate to this poem.. keep up the great work!!
    love always,
    edina*

  • 19 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    that was awesome! you're really good at rhyming. the poem was so sad and i can relate. keep it up! take care:)

  • 19 years ago

    by MeL JoY

    excellent
    !!
    ~~5

  • 19 years ago

    by jennifer

    Amazing!!!