wow....that has emotion written all over it...great job!

Nice poem but the title should be 'you're'.

The last five lines are really quite good. I've felt like that myself.

Bert

great poem lots of people go throught this, even about different subjects, everyone can find a way to relate to it in some ways! least i know i can. take care :) PLP your firned always

~lil slam~

wow i really spelt friend wrong lol sry!

~lil slam~

Nice poem with emotion.

Nice poem with emotion.