wow that was good if i were i would never stop writin

beautiful...and i know ive said this to many people but it gets better in the end...if its not better, then its not the end....i tell myself that many times a day and it really does help...keep your head up

excellent poem... pretty deep and has some good thoughts in it... keep up the good writting....

your such a talented writer! you have been in my favorites for a long time, i am now started from the bottom up and aiming towards reading all your poems! take care, your friend PLP

~lil slam~

OMFG BRILLIANT!!!!! 5/5 You're VERY talented! Beautiful...dark....nice vocabulary. :P Since u commented on the song i have posted i decided to take a look at your work and i do not regret it! U just might be one of my favorites...! Take Care and Keep Up The AMAZING Work...Peace and Luv, //ari\\