wow that was a great poem, i wish i could right that good

Line for line this piece was so sweet! I really liked it!

oh man, that is one great love note to be given to a girl... what did she say??? I was planning on writing something like that for a girl but I don't think I can write as well as you can :) keep it up :)

really beautiful. if love was how you defined it, i could use some of it now... great rhyming scheme from beginning to end. take care:)

I loved this poem. It was different from other poems and i could relate to every line.

this is incredibly!! your words are so powerful, like..gosh, you're amazing...you captured the true definition, i loved this so much,. dont stop writing take care <3333
-Mortalidaga

OMG, I loved this poem .. Keep it up .. Check out some of my poems sometime too !

I can only hope my man feels and thinks the same as you! Whatta a beautifully written piece of poetry which is so obviously open and straight from the heart...thanks for sharing such beautiful thoughts with us
Much Luv
Eirisa xoxo