That was an amazing poem sweety...it gave me chills. Wow...is all i can say....great words, and even better lesson to be learned.

That's wonderful....you're so talented!! Wonderful...so wonderful!!!
Amy

another excellent poem, gave it 5, this was extremly close to me in a way i can't explain, thankyou u so much for posting ure poems on here cause i love to read them.... luv jessycar

This was one of the best poems written about this I think.. it captures it exactally... and i know what its like.. thanx for the amazing poem.. i gave u a 5

well dont peom girl keep it up

That was a really good poem! keep up the good work!

Wow that was intense. You're the one person I can count on when I want to venture into a dark world. And honestly I like walking around in one quite alot hehe. Great job, it reminds of many girls I know from school.

oh my god! that was the best poem ive ever ever read!!! i feel really bad for all the ppl who think about slittin their wrist...so now that i read that im gonna be nice to everyone!!!! that was really a leason learned...keep up the amazing work!! i love it ...i gave it a 5