Those are pretty scary. I think the first sonnet was supposed to be Shakespearian or something, but it didnt really follow the syllabic rules, so I was a bit confused by that. I think another one of those was Petrachian, but I'm not too sure. Pretty good work.

I applaud you trying out the sonnets. Although i only know the form of the first one properly and i agree with Sean, the syllable count wasn't right for a Shakespearian sonnet.
Well done with the actual poems though.

ur good =)... love ur sonnets =) much love for ya gurlo... so so good =)... hope u pass by mine sometimes ... =) much love...

GOOD JOB SARA!!