Comments : My Guardian Angel

  • 19 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    Hi there. First off, welcome to the site! Secondly, Sorry if you find all of my corrections bothersome, but it is something I do, almost my job on this site or something. Anyway, I copy pasted your poem into this comment, but I corrected any/all the mistakes I found, so read through it carefully, and if you like it, then you can change your poem to put in all the corrections. I really liked it, and I hope you submit more work soon.

    My guardian angel, always at my side,
    I can't imagine what you see.
    To come from a place so beautiful,
    To keep a watch out for me.

    You'll protect me from all the harm
    If ever I should fall,
    I know my guardian angel is
    Here if I should call.

    I pray at night, they're all to you.
    I know you'll answer my plea.
    My guardian angel, while I'm asleep,
    Your awake watching over me.

  • 19 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    very beautiful!

    (sean missed one... last line first word should also be you're)

  • 19 years ago

    by Rebekah

    Thanks for all your comments

  • 19 years ago

    by stanley potter

    that was good. thanks

  • 19 years ago

    by stanley potter

    that was good. thanks