aww, this poem is beautiful bryan :) keep writing! your poetry is amazing :)thanks for sharing it with us all!!
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-Mortalidaga

HeY, Thnx for your comment on my poem . . " I NEED" . . ur right guys ARENT mature , lol and I know that .. lol .. ! But NEways I loved this poem, It was great .. sad but great .. Keep it up, feel free to check out some of my other poems too , lol , ! THANX !
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i 'm sorry that you feel this way. I have to say that your poems are great and thank you for comment one of my poems. It means a lot.
Keep writing, I like your poems.
much love

Bryan, that is totaly well written. Poems of undying love are so special but even more so coming from a guy...its nice to know u have a soft side. great work!