such excellent poem! great rhyming scheme and collection of words. yeah, a sign of a great poet. take care:)

I really liked this part
"My friends have grown distant
On no shoulder can I cry
Is this life that I live,
A deceitful little lie?"

I thought this poem had great rhyme to it. I gave it a 5 can't wait to read some more!

Definite 5 again

:-( good poem