Aww Bryan this was such a good poem! I love the whole idea of writing a letter to God. And from a little soon-to-be eight year old boy? That just makes it even more emotional and sweet! You did an excellent job, it flowed so well and I look forward to reading more of your poetry! Thanks for the comment on my poem "Through it all". Oh and welcome to my favorite's list! =] Keep writing!

~Grace

OMG! That's so sad and so beautiful at the same time! Geez Bryan! you're so amazing, you're an inspiration to me! Gosh, I love your poetry so much, please don't ever stop writing <33
-Mortalidaga
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Amazing... Truley amazing.... The way it flowed... The way it was worded... Made me remeber the times when my life was like that but at the same time made me feel like i wasn't so alone.... Keep up the good work man... seriously.... Someone with your talent should never give it up

Hey, LOVED this poem..You did a great job!

I have a poem written from a child as well.. but its' too santa... could you please read it??.. Anyways. ADD MORE POEMS SO I CAN READ THEM!! this one was just awesome as well..

take care,
much love,
danielle
xxoo

aww!! This was absolutley amazing..we need more guys like you in the world not just because you write letters to god or whatever but because your poems are amazing jsut the way you express your self is awsome! You are great...Keep your head high!

So sad! :-( ... but so good!!

If this peom does'nt tug at your heart strings, you have no heart. The saddest part is there have been, will be, and are alot of true Jake stories. Excellent write dude.

wow the way you have communicated your point of view in words is amazing - to speak from the innocent eyes of a child in this sort of situation would be extremely difficult but you did a great job - added purity with the letter to god touched my heart even deeper well done you have a wonderful talent thanks for sharing

Oh my....this was heart breaking! Very uniquely written! Keep writing!!

This poem was good! It was soo sad! very well written! i loved it soo much! and thanx for ur comment on my poem:) Luv lots
-kels