Comments : Untitled(couldn't think of anything)

  • 19 years ago

    by Kevin J

    If you dont write a title, ppl will think you didn't even try to write anything worth reading, and they'll blow it off.

    I think you did a good job;)

    If you reformat your stanza's, maybe make it one solid paragraph, I think readers would take to it more...that 2 rating is way harsh...I'll fix that tho;)

    btw...I hope that worked out. I know love and relationships can be crazy confusing

  • 19 years ago

    by Kevin J

    title suggestions: "Regrets In Love" or "Loves Confussion" or "Sorry..I Want You Back"

    I come up with my best ideas when I'm sleepy:p..lol