awww...Bryan..this poem's so sad, but it;s so good too! you are an amzing writer, your words are so powerful and so majestic...i hope you keep writing cause i know I wanan keep reading your lovely work...<33
Take care..
xoxoox
-Mortalidaga

ps. Thanks for saying all that sweet stuff about me in the poem ThundersRose wrote. :)

Bryan this poem is so sad!!! You're such a good writer and in this poem, well the way you wrote it completely brings the reader into your world. An excellent job! Keep writing!

~Grace

Awee..this is a sad poem but wonderfully writtten! great job!

oh wow ... i'm so damn sry if that's true... stay strong :'(... your a beautiful writer, and i'm srue a great person as well...

Awww this poem is so sad but beautiful. Your poems touch me so much. I can tell your poems are from the heart.x

My goodness...you have a gift when it comes to tragedy!! This was another sad piece, but beautifully conveyed!!

Wow that was so tragic and sad. I hope it isnt true