Oh how i know the feeling.. This has been something i have been thinking about allot recently.. I have been brought up in a somewhat science dedicated household and my parents chosing to let me grow up and letting me decide myself if i wish to become christened or join any religion so without reigion in my bias i have become somewhat science based myself and have come to the relisation that nothing in life lasts that everything we do everything we see everything we love and care about will eventually die and fade away.. nothing lasts forever so why do anything atall..

Not only that but i also recently thought of how the best days in my life were in year 9-10 during high school i knew it then and i still know it now i have experianced the best times of my life they have passed why live on with but a pale shadow of my happiness remaining?

Thanks for your opinion semeran - im might leave mine out here and email you personally re this...your comments are greatly appreciated

hey i like ur poems. i'm 13 and i started writing poems about one year or so ago. u seem to know ur stufff about poems so if u get a chance could u check my poems out and tell me what i could change to make it better even if its just a little thing! like said b4 i like ur poems they have real meaning so keep writing! ~michelle~

WOW! I can totally relate to this poem....I expecially Like the line

I’ll always be striving to meet my goals
Eternally searching for that missing piece of my soul…

I thought was just the most amazing line I have ever heard in my entire life. So True!!! You write amazing well lol thats why you have been in my favorites sence the favorites thing started. Anyways thanks for commenting on my poem Have a good day :)

Thanks eveyone your all part of the inspiration i need!

I think every adult has those thoughts every now then. The feeling of not being fulfilled, wanting more, but not knowing what that more is. It's that feeling that drives us to search different avenues of life, or venture out. Anyway, I think you did an excellent job of conveying those thoughts/feelings. Keep up the great writng and I'll keep reading ;)