I love this Holly, its just the type of poem that makes me think 'i wish i'd written that!' I've been catching up on your other poems and they are pretty wonderful. Keep them coming.

OMG i could totally relate to this! Amazing you described those feeling so well took the words out of my mouth whatta amazing poem im truly in awe keep up the great work xox

Quite extraordinary. Yet another writing that fills my heart. Very nicely done.

wow, holly, that was excellent! you had perfect rhyimg and it flowed so well! keep it up <333
xxx take care xxxx
-Mortalidaga

That really sets a mood of enchantment, Holly. It's delightful. And you have expressed it beautifully with a nice rythmic flow.

so amazing!!!. It kept my attention threw out the whole poem, It flowed very well. I think you did a great job writing this.

Amazing poem. I dont usually enjoy reading love poems, but this one was truly beautiful, keep it up.

Wow, this is really touching. It was strange, I didn't think it would be good when I first glanced at it and thought it was over rated, but trust me...it wasnt. It was all great, but when I read the last line everything just fell into place...or something fell. Great poem:)
~Kayla

That was awesome, well done

That was a great poem, and like so many others have said, you captured the feeling perfectly. Everything seemed to flow just right. I am very impressed. Keep up the good work.

Nice write :)

great poem! it kept me glued throughout! keep it up hunn :0)

** Sigh ** Long distance relationships... :-/

Great Poem!!!

WOW! very well written, I love the flow that you have! another masterpiece!

--Sher

this is a very beautiful poem

very good, tear, its really really reallyreally really really really really really good

Lovely poem

wow! this is such a great poem, i like it! it is almost exactly what i feel for my boyfriend! come check out my poems and tell me what you think!

wow, this is really good. itz exaktly how i feel about sumone i know, but they no longer feel the same.

wow, this is really good. itz exaktly how i feel about sumone i know, but they no longer feel the same.