Comments : Sooner Or Later

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashmore

    No. I didnt want to read this from you! OR anyone for that matter. Suicide hun, is not the answer. It may seem that it may help you but it doesnt. I have been in your place so many times. I care about you and I would miss you. But you arent going anywhere now are you? And Yes, your family would miss you dont even utter such words about them being happy if you were to kill yourself either. Oh hun, be happy! I'll call you soon, and check up. Love u -Jessica xx

  • 19 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    WOW! this is awesome! (Again, I must say that I am glad you are over this depressive course)....

    The first time I read it, I thought that a better ending might be:
    Sooner or later
    I will go over the edge
    And noone will be there to catch me

    but the more I read it, themore I like it just the way it is...

    but hey...here's an idea...now that you ARE on to writing about love...you could maybe write a "I-used-to-be-suicidal-but-now-I-have-you" type poem.... and you could end it with "If I ever get there again, I know you'll be there to catch me!"