This is dedicated to...... Someone. People who read my work from the begining will know who. Please vote and comment.

very good

Hey,
David, great poem. Keep up the good work!!!

Love,
Ashley

Very good poem! Loved it! =] Keep writing!

~Grace

I really enjoyed this but it made me feel such a saddness! I hope eveything works out for you hun your in my prayers - great poem keep it up!
Much Luv Eirisa xoxo

That was beautiful, keep writing.

Another masterpiece! Well done! I LOVE your work. You're DEFINITELY going on my faves list! This poem touched me in two ways...one was the guy trying to make himself a better person so the girl would love him...and the feeling the girl must have for this guy to be doing this all for her. Great work!

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.:jOy:.

wow what a talent you have.....lucky angel...keep it up!!!

wow...that was so beautiful and full of emotion. i loved it, great job!

hey, my ex boyfriend aka is my best friend now...i changed for him because i new it would be better if i was a different person..although i think he didn't notice...i changed not just for him but for a better life...but he was a reason to start but wasn't the reason to finish it up...that was all up to me..and sumtimes i believe that my life would be different if it weren't for meeting him....thats why i commented i wanted to say that change is sumtimes good....good luck with that gurl okay..anyways i will end it here...good poem Lys

Aww! Great poem!! You're such a great writer!! I love this poem!!

Amy