Comments : Unpredictable

  • 19 years ago

    by Lillian

    ahhh... love this... esp the opening lines. sometimes you can see all the way to someones soul. it's a moment to cherish.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lillian

    hi libby.. thanks for the nice comments.. this dilemma of mine is killing me..all i can do is write write write.. anyway, you sounded like you understood so well..lol funny how love is universal in its ups and downs. i read thru some of your poems and wow.. they are good. look forward to reading more.

  • 19 years ago

    by Rebekah

    this is such a good poem. You write so well.