As always, you have a great storyline. Even if it is about murder, its still a well written poem. (lol, sorry my series is taking too long, but you know what they say, you can't rush perfection :P) Take care

--Bryce~

woah... where the hell did u come up with some thing like that. i mean it was awesome.. but geesh :-( really really really scary!!!!!

maybe kyle will come back isn't that what he said to his father *sly smile*

That was dark, mistic and moving...quite the wordress you are!

Once again... I love your darkness.. thx so much for recomending these poems to me.. exactly what i was looking for! thx so much Jacki and keep up the darkness...!