pretty dark, but honest. heartache makes for the best poems...hopefully you'll have a better experience w/ love and you can write happy love poems!

Sarah

Thanks, yea i dont know why but i cant express happiness in poems very much. lol

SO MUCH EMOTION AND VERY WELL WRITTEN.

woaaaah *blinks* great piece, lots of depth and it's obvious that it came from the heart, keep strong sweetie:)beanxx

wow, that was great! i really mean it. it was "deep" if you know what i mean but it was also very sincere and well written. u have talent! 5/5 for sure!
~SatuzKa~