thanx 4 ur comment but hunni i think u got urself mixed up,
Sorry..."depends on you" doesn't rhyme with "love"...i honestly have no clue that you are trying to say, my poems dont have these words/sentences in it. lolz

xxoo,
alysse

YES!!!, Great poem, geat message, it made me think about the things I day dream about :) *blush*... I guess you would know what that is ;). You are so right, only "I" can make my dream come to reality, and that's what I will aim for :) Thanks for this great message girl :D

Thought that it was a tiny bit too

LOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGG

Score i gave you: 4!! coz like i said (refer to the above)