Wow! WHOA! hmm - i bow down! I am speechless this was amazing...purely amazing! Im running out on wonderful things to say about this spectacular talent you have - i need to be able to find more words!!! This is one of my faves nice work Eirisa oxxo

This was excellent. It grabbed me witht he first stanza. I had to read it 2 times, I loved it.
The flow and stucture are perfect. That's one of your strongest points, the structure of the poem. You are a natural.
The rhymes are incredible.
Nice.
it made me feel good somehow.
~David

Thank you David ;)