Nicely written, though I've never seen a paragraph poem before, but hey, still looks good to me~

--Bryce~

Actually.. Ahahaha.. Um.. Er.. I don't think this would really count as a poem.. It has to be broken up.. Oh well..

That was excellent, really excellent. And ireally know how you feel, i love the contrsting emotions and the idea of it being a nightmare, i dont think i could have expressed that feeling at all the way you did, well done ;)

That is a lovely unrhymed poem. In unrhymed poems I feel because you don't have the rhyming to help with the flow and emotions, you have put a lot in yourself, this is what you did. I loved your descriptions and the emotions in the poem. I thought it was a beautiful love poem.
I have never seen a paragraph poem either. Maybe you could put it in the lay out of a poem. What I mean is add stanzas, or breaks for extra effect, eg where you put ... it could change to a new stanza. But it's totally up to you, just an idea.
Great work.

I liked this poem a lot. Sometimes in order to get your feelings out you will have to write a non-rhyming poem. It was very good, keep it up! =)

~Grace

Wow that was amazing work! Keep it up

I think you did a good job. I've tried writing poems without rhyming and it's really really hard...really:p I admire anyone that can, and you seemed to pull it off nicely;)

Thanx 4 your comment btw

This is ExCCeleNt. I really like the description and the passion behind it. great work. xmollyxx