really liked this one. well done.

hey this is one of my faves it was really lost and open and im so glad you decided to share it thanks! I think alot of people out there will be able to relate to this piece - you certainly touched me with it i like the langage you use in your poetry, its very deep and descriptive and adds to the effect!
Much Luv Eirisa xox

Once again a great poem!!! good job!
keep it up~
~laurel

amazing job Kevin. As always this poem really reached out to me. Take care and keep writing, ur very talanted.