i entered this poem ina competition at my school for poetry day and i have been takin into the semi finals find out more on thursday :D

i went and read my poem out today with three other people from my age group unfortunality i did not win but i am a runner up i have a certifiacte and a poem book so maybe next year with another poem:D

That's a really good poem. Did that really happen to you, or did you just write it? Either way I thought it was good. I think it's awesome that you got recognized for it. Good job. Take care.
><> Kiesha

Wow, This one really touched me. Only because my dad is taking me to our docter to tell him I cut. I am very scared as to what is going to happen now. And being put into a place like this, Is something I really fear. So you did a great job on this. If it was not based on true events. Then you used a great POV! Keep writing! 5/5

- Natalie x-x

Great poem.... its so off the wall, i love it!!

5/5

Also i have a new poem out for the contest..

Lost With Time (Part Two)