Wow....this was a very thought provoking piece!! Well done!!!

i likes this poem it was very short and subtle but contained some serioius language and power! Well done i enjoyed each line and could relate too...thanks also for taking the time to comment on my work i look forward to reading more of yours if you could do the same! Peace and Much Luv Eirisa xox

This piece, is awesome your really talented at writing this particular poem has great emotion written in it, great job.
~laurel