Comments : I Turned (You Weren't There)

  • 19 years ago

    by It Itty

    Great poem-you're the best! As said before, you are an incredible person, and I love hanging around with you.

  • 19 years ago

    by PAUL HEWSON

    Your smile kept me happy,
    Your frown showed me what was wrong.
    I remember the look in your eyes, That showed our unbreakable bond.

    kin awsemoe !! u are a good writer

  • 19 years ago

    by PAUL HEWSON

    this is my fav of your work ... brilliant ending . def a 5 .. keep it up you really are goodat what you do

  • 19 years ago

    by Unseen Exposure

    I really enjoyed this poem ... I can relate to it in so many ways, which is what made it an easy read. I really liked "I turned to love you, but you weren't there." It's an awesome ending to a wonderful poem. Keep it up ...

  • 19 years ago

    by Anne Conner

    It has great rhythm and it's very sweet!

  • 19 years ago

    by L0KA

    Wow I just luv's diz poem. U exprezz yourzelf in diz poem very well. I am going through a similar thing with my friendz. Keep up da good work. Good luck. Peaze.