this is really good but you probably should have submitted it as a quote because its so short. its excellent though.
xnikkix

So little to say, but so well portrayed!

short sweet and to the point... i think you have the ability to be a very good writer... keep it up, cant wait to read some more of ur stuff

thank you all

short and sweet. keep it up! thank you for your comment, it meant a lot to me! take care!

~Grace