Yeah, I agree with Chris. This was very original and you described everything perfectly. I felt like I was holding a firefly. I think your imagination is what sets you apart from other poets. Great job. I love your work. Keep it up.

What a beautiful peice of poetry. The descriptions and imagery was lovely. I thought it was a very well written and original peice. Not one fault in my eyes. Well done.

WOW! omg that is really excellent, i love the way you have used the firefly so different and original, excellent!

I really liked how you compared your life to the firefly's. It ws different, but written well. The rhyme scheme was different also, it seemed like you rhymed when you could, but didn't make the whole poem just about rhyming. Nice work.

How true this line is:

But unlike me
You fly free

I've never thought of compairing my life to a firefly but how perfect it is. I thought this poem was unique, and wonderful. YOu use great descriptions like the beacon to find a mate. I had great visuals. ANd also wow what an imagination you must have :). I loved this poem you did an excellent job!

I like all your poems. They are so awesome. I rate them all 5 even though I havn't got to read them all yet.

WOW!! Excellent! Great comparison...
I love this:
It's as I try to snatch you back
That you remind me of the one I love
Just sitting there, hovering just out of reach

and then... at the end.... the bug dies... and that's exactly how it is when you realize that a love can never be... AWESOME!!!!