very good job expressing your love. I really like this piece.

--Sher

All your peoms are awesome. They have so much emotion and power behind them. You relaly write them from your heart, which is what a true writer does. Great job, keep it up, and I hope things work out for you. ~dandy~ ps- thanks for commenting on my poem! i love to get feedback

Aww I have been there before. I hope things start getting better. A very good poem here.. I liked it a lot. I gave you a 4. Keep up the good work! =)

~Grace

that is excellent :) well done!

Good poem. Free verse are some of the easiest (if not the) and yet some of the hardest to make good but u've done a good job on this one.

Very nice poem, keep up the good work, thanxs for commenting on mine tc x x x

very nice poem, ya know that Ive been readin your poems for a while now and always just check around if ya have any good ones and well a month wait wasnt so bad after all, cuz of the work ya produced, keep up the great work, as always

really good, you sure are talented.