I love the way yoyu word your poems.
Excellent one here. I can relate to this poem a lot myself.
The flow was smooth, and the rhymes were great. Thank you for sharing this poem. My Brother loves it too. :)
~David

whoa you're so talented!! it was amain, and im like not religious at all, but you just put everyting....so nicely! i know nice is a shit word, but it really was such a good poem!! alfie xxx

...are you religious? anyhow, ideologies aside, i like the writing and though i don't seem to have much use for religion as of yet, i've always thought it to be beautiful for those who can still believe in something - especially nowadays.
unless they're a fundamentalist bastard, in which case they can suck my proverbial cock.

great poem. it flowed very nicely

Thanx for all the cool comments :))*group hug*

I really enjoy reading your style of Poetry.

Very nice write, kinda leaves me speechless. I really do like it, gj :)

wow. great poem. yeah i thought you were religious. the flow, rythm, and rhyming was all on point. xmollyxx