although i don't really understand the concept of God and what have you this poem is very good :D
keep up great work
Luv Flea

dude i know you think i'd be all over your ass cause im an atheist but i think that your dedication to your religion is pretty amazing and you should totally keep writing like this. i would even go as far as saying i admire how you put yourself and your beliefs like this so yep. keep on trucking, as they say

I love religious and particularly Christian Poems and it was a joy coming in contact with your pages. I guess your faith radiates, cos it speaks so well in your writ. Keep it up!
If you have time check some of mine, you may find some faith in the feelings. Take care